On Mon, Dec 1, 2014 at 5:58 PM, Michael Guss <mguss@wikimedia.org> wrote:
> Hello everyone,
>
> Here is the proposed social media for the Wikimedia Deutschland/ Europe's
> largest Conference blog post. Thanks for reviewing!
>
> Here is the blog
> post:https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/12/01/wikimedia-deutschland-organised-europes-largest-conference-on-open-educational-resources/
>
> t: Learn how @WikimediaDE organized Europe's largest conference on Open
> Educational Resources #OER :
> https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/12/01/wikimedia-deutschland-organised-europes-largest-conference-on-open-educational-resources/
LGTM
>
> t: For the promotion of free knowledge: @wmde holds Europe's largest Open
> Education Conference #OER
> https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/12/01/wikimedia-deutschland-organised-europes-largest-conference-on-open-educational-resources/
"Open Educational Resources" isn't quite the same as "Open Education"
(which would be more general). Also, we shouldn't use their dummy
(placeholder) handle @wmde.
>
> t: Open Education Resources Conference is Europe's largest #OER event,
> sponsored by @wmde
> https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/12/01/wikimedia-deutschland-organised-europes-largest-conference-on-open-educational-resources/--
If we wanted to use the actual name of the conference, it would be
"OERde14". Also, "sponsored" and "organized" are different things.
>
> t: Recently, @wmde held Europe's largest Open Educational Resources
> Conference #OER
> https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/12/01/wikimedia-deutschland-organised-europes-largest-conference-on-open-educational-resources/
This one is fine too, except that it should be @wikimediaDE instead of @wmde.
>
> t: Welcome to Europe's largest Open Educational Resource Conference, brought
> to you by @wmde
> https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/12/01/wikimedia-deutschland-organised-europes-largest-conference-on-open-educational-resources/
To me, "welcome" sounds to much like the event is just beginning.
>
> f/g: Wikimedia Deutschland held the largest Open Education Resource
> Conference in Europe, making accessibility to OER tools a critical talking
> point in the open source and free knowledge movements.
> https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/12/01/wikimedia-deutschland-organised-europes-largest-conference-on-open-educational-resources/
Not sure that's an accurate summary.
>
> f/g: Wikimedia Deutschland was able to hold the largest Open Education
> Resource Conference in Europe, but not without a little help! Learn how WMDE
> was able to make this important event happen and what significant impact it
> had on the Free knowledge movement.
>
> https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/12/01/wikimedia-deutschland-organised-europes-largest-conference-on-open-educational-resources/
Reworded:
f/g: Wikimedia Deutschland was able to hold the largest conference on
Open Educational Resources in Europe, but not without a little help!
Learn how the chapter was able to make this important event happen and
what its most significant impact was.
(If you look at the list in the impact section, the post actually
doesn't mention significant impact on the free knowledge movement
itself - unsurprisingly, since the event was targeted at other
communities.)
--
Tilman Bayer
Senior Operations Analyst (Movement Communications)
Wikimedia Foundation
IRC (Freenode): HaeB
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