In the second one, "improved" -> "improve."

In the third one, I don't think you don't need a comma.

Perhaps use #Wikipedia instead to try to draw in more people?

Best,
--Ed

On Mon, Jun 1, 2015 at 5:49 PM, Michael Guss <mguss@wikimedia.org> wrote:
Hello everyone,

It is June 1 (for a good portion of the world still, sorry getting this out a bit late), which means today is the start of Wiki Loves Pride. 

This month of June is dedicated to Wiki Loves Pride 2015, a global campaign to expand and improve LGBT-related content across several Wikimedia projects. Read more about it here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Wiki_Loves_Pride_2015

Thanks for reviewing!

t: June kicksoff the second annual #WikiLovesPride! Help increase the number of people and perspectives contributing to #LGBT info on @Wikipedia:

t: Today begins #WikiLovesPride 2015. Help improved #LGBT representation on @Wikipedia: 

t: Today begins the second annual #WikiLovesPride, led by @WikimediaLGBT. Improve #LGBT representation on @Wikipedia: 

Fb/g: June marks the second annual #WikiLovesPride, a month-long campaign to increase the number of people and perspectives contributing to LGBT information on Wikipedia. 





--
Michael Guss
Research Analyst
Wikimediafoundation.org

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