Thanks all! My concern with the more specific version is that the average user might not know what those features mean without further explanation. With product descriptions we should use simple, clear language as much as possible. Also it would be good to make it clear up front that this is for Android only.

What about something like:

Are you an Android user? Check out the updated Wikipedia app for Android--now with improved article browsing and language selection!



On Wednesday, August 12, 2015, Dmitry Brant <dbrant@wikimedia.org> wrote:
So, originally my thinking was that tabbed browsing is a very fundamental feature that should have been part of the app from the very beginning, so I was afraid that for us to loudly announce it at this point might be perceived as unwarranted horn-tooting...
But looking at the latest Play Store reviews, it looks like the users are responding very positively to it (comparing to the previous version), so I wouldn't be opposed to mentioning tabbed browsing explicitly.

I'm happy to leave it in Comms' capable hands to decide! (I kind of like James's first suggestion)


On Tue, Aug 11, 2015 at 10:29 PM, James Alexander <jalexander@wikimedia.org> wrote:
Looks good overall but if you wanted a bit more spice maybe something like:

Tabbed browsing, faster language switching & more! Android users, now is the time to check out our newly updated app https://play.google.com/store/apps/details?id=org.wikipedia&hl=en

Or


Tabbed browsing & faster language switching are just some of the new improvements to our newly updated android app. https://play.google.com/store/apps/details?id=org.wikipedia&hl=en

Sent from my iPhone


James Alexander
Legal and Community Advocacy
Wikimedia Foundation


On Aug 11, 2015, at 19:31, Juliet Barbara <jbarbara@wikimedia.org> wrote:

Thank you! I know it's not the most exciting language, so if others have ideas please throw them out. :) 

On Tue, Aug 11, 2015 at 5:25 PM, Joe Sutherland <jsutherland@wikimedia.org> wrote:
This looks good to me. Michael or I can get it out tomorrow perhaps.

Joe

On 12 August 2015 at 01:04, Juliet Barbara <jbarbara@wikimedia.org> wrote:
Hi everyone, 

Can we promote the latest updates to the Android app on social? An idea below to get us started. Thanks! 

Facebook/Twitter

Do you have an Android device? Check out the latest updates to the Wikipedia Android apphttps://play.google.com/store/apps/details?id=org.wikipedia&hl=en 



_______________________________________________
Social-media mailing list
Social-media@lists.wikimedia.org
https://lists.wikimedia.org/mailman/listinfo/social-media




--
Joe Sutherland
Communications Intern [remote]

_______________________________________________
Social-media mailing list
Social-media@lists.wikimedia.org
https://lists.wikimedia.org/mailman/listinfo/social-media




--
Juliet Barbara
Senior Communications Manager I Wikimedia Foundation
149 New Montgomery Street I San Francisco, CA 94105
jbarbara@wikimedia.org I +1 (512) 750-5677

_______________________________________________
Social-media mailing list
Social-media@lists.wikimedia.org
https://lists.wikimedia.org/mailman/listinfo/social-media



--
Dmitry Brant
Product Owner (Android), Mobile Apps Team
Wikimedia Foundation
https://www.mediawiki.org/wiki/Wikimedia_mobile_engineering



--
Juliet Barbara
Senior Communications Manager I Wikimedia Foundation
149 New Montgomery Street I San Francisco, CA 94105
jbarbara@wikimedia.org I +1 (512) 750-5677