On Jan 21, 2015, at 1:17 PM, Joe Sutherland <jsutherland@wikimedia.org> wrote:_______________________________________________Hi,I love the report! Some comments on the wording below...On 21 January 2015 at 9:08:17 pm, Fabrice Florin (fflorin@wikimedia.org) wrote:
Hey social media team,
We just published a blog post about the making of the annual report, by our own Heather Walls:
https://blog.wikimedia.org/2015/01/21/annual-report/
Congrats again to Heather and everyone who worked on this absolutely wonderful report :)
Here are some ideas for how to spread the word on social networks:
Twitter (@wikimedia/@wikipedia):
Today, WMF launched our 7th Annual Report. Here’s the story of how it was created. (link)This is really weird to my ears. “WMF” is a thing, and combining it with “our” is a mismatch in this instance. If we’re tweeting from @wikimedia, then I’d suggest “we” instead of “WMF”. Otherwise, try “...WMF launched its…”?
Facebook/Google+
Today, WMF launched our 7th Annual Report. This year’s theme: knowledge is a foundation. Here’s the story of how this report was created.
(link)I like the snappiness, but my above point still stands for this.
Joe
Please help us get the word out about this story :)
Thanks!
Fabrice
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