Agree with Tilman about the humans. People seems a better fit. :)

Anna Koval, M.Ed.

Manager, Wikipedia Education Program

Wikimedia Foundation

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On Tue, Jul 29, 2014 at 3:53 PM, Tilman Bayer <tbayer@wikimedia.org> wrote:

On Mon, Jul 28, 2014 at 5:24 PM, Carlos Monterrey
<cmonterrey@wikimedia.org> wrote:
> Hi all,
>
> Here is the proposed SM for today's blog post regarding the Wikipedia Zero
> petition  Thanks for reviewing:
>
> Blog post:
> https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/07/28/petition-for-free-access-to-wikipedia-on-cellphones/
>
> SM calendar:
> https://meta.wikimedia.org/wiki/Social_media/Calendar#July_28-August_3
>
> Sign the Petition for Free Access to Wikipedia on Cellphones
>
> t: All humans deserve equal access to the sum of all knowledge. Please sign
> our petition & have your voice heard:
> https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/07/28/petition-for-free-access-to-wikipedia-on-cellphones/

LGTM (others may still want to weigh in on the choice of "humans", but
at least the word is used in
https://wikimediafoundation.org/wiki/Vision too )

>
> t: Free knowledge for all! Please sign our petition & let mobile carriers
> know they should work with us:
> https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/07/28/petition-for-free-access-to-wikipedia-on-cellphones/

I don't like the emphasis on "us". How about:
Free knowledge for all! Please sign the petition asking mobile
carriers to provide free access to Wikipedia:

>
> t: WMF has published a petition for free access to Wikipedia on mobile
> phones. Please help bring equal access to all:
> https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/07/28/petition-for-free-access-to-wikipedia-on-cellphones/

Looks OK to me.

>
> f/g: The WMF is pleased to announce the publishing of a petition for free
> access to Wikipedia on mobile phones, along with a short documentary film
> called "Knowledge for Everyone."
> https://meta.wikimedia.org/wiki/Wikimedia_Blog/Drafts/Sign_the_Petition_for_Free_Access_to_Wikipedia_on_Cellphones
>

Looks postable...

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