I like these! I'd use ellipses (…) instead of the dashes, as in "Lights, camera… edit!", but otherwise they look good to me.

Joe

On 1 October 2015 at 22:24, Michael Guss <mguss@wikimedia.org> wrote:
Hello everyone,

This saturday, October 3rd, in Los Angeles there will be an edit-a-thon, the latest in a series called "Unforgetting LA" hosted by online art magazine, East of Borneo. Here are some proposed social media messages. Thank you for reviewing!

Here's the proposed share link: http://www.eastofborneo.org/unforgetting

Fb/G: Lights, camera–edit! Join online art magazine @East of Borneo in their latest edit-a-thon this Saturday, October 3rd hosted at the Academy of Motion Picture Arts and Sciences.

Fb/G:  This Saturday, October 3rd, join online art magazine @East of Borneo in their latest edit-a-thon being held at the Academy of Motion Picture Arts and Sciences. Lights, camera-edit!

Fb/G: Love film and Wikipedia? Join online art magazine @East of Borneo for an edit-a-thon this Saturday, October 3rd, at the Academy of Motion Picture Arts and Sciences.

Fb/G: I would like to thank the Academy for...hosting this Saturday's edit-a-thon! This Saturday, October 3rd, join @East of Borneo is their latest edit-a-thon being held at the Academy of Motion Picture Arts and Sciences.


@wikipedia: Lights, camera–edit! Join @eastofborneo for their latest edit-a-thon Saturday, Oct 3, @TheAcademy: http://buff.ly/1LmR4iL

@wikipedia: Love film and #Wikipedia? Join @eastofborneo for an edit-a-thon Saturday, Oct 3rd, being held @TheAcademy: 

@wikipedia: I would like to thank @TheAcademy...for hosting this weekend's edit-a-thon! Join @eastofborneo & add film history: http://buff.ly/1LmR4iL

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