Yes! LGTM!
On Thu, Oct 9, 2014 at 6:47 PM, Michael Guss <mguss@wikimedia.org> wrote:
> Hi all,
>
> Here is the proposed SM for the Nobel Laureate Editathon. Thanks for
> reviewing!
>
> Blog post:
> https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/10/09/wikinobel/
>
> t: The Nobel Peace Prize is going to be announced in one hour! Join
> @WikimediaNorge in their editathon about the winner
> https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/10/09/wikinobel/
>
> This tweet could be a "double-down" tweet to be posted an hour before the
> announcement at 11:00am Norwegian time (3am PCT).
Let's do that! I would suggest to modify as follows, so as to catch
the hashtags:
The #NobelPeacePrize will be announced in 1 hour! Join @WikimediaNorge
in an editathon about the winner:
https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/10/09/wikinobel/ #Wikinobel
>
>
> t: The Nobel Peace Center hosts @WikimediaNorge with an editathon to boost
> content about prize winners #Wikinobel
> https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/10/09/wikinobel/
>
> t: Wikipedians to help improve the Nobel Peace Prize Winners article on
> Wikipedia on Friday #Wikinobel
> https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/10/09/wikinobel/
>
> t: Nobel Peace Centers celebrates new peace prize winner with editathon to
> improve recipients article #Wikinobel
> https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/10/09/wikinobel/
I like this one as the first tweet. Fixing a typo, and mentioning WP:
Nobel Peace Center celebrates new peace prize winner with editathon
about recipient's Wikipedia article
https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/10/09/wikinobel/ #Wikinobel
>
> t: Nobel Peace Center and @WikimediaNorge celebrate new Nobel prize winner
> with an editathon #Wikinobel
> https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/10/09/wikinobel/
>
> f/g: The Nobel Peace Center celebrates the new peace prize winner with an
> editathon hosted by Wikimedia Norge to improve the the article about the
> prize winners: https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/10/09/wikinobel/
>
I would put it into future tense. Fixing a typo and mentioning WP:
In a few hours, the Nobel Peace Center will celebrate the new peace
prize winner with an editathon hosted by Wikimedia Norge to improve
the Wikipedia article about the prize winner(s):
> f/g: In celebration of the awarding of the Nobel Peace Prize, the Nobel
> Peace Center and Wikimedia Norge host a Nobel Laureate-themed editathon to
> improve the article about the Nobel Peace Prize and its winners
> https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/10/09/wikinobel/
>
>
>
>
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> Michael Guss
> Research Analyst
> Wikimediafoundation.org
> mguss@wikimedia.org
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