Looks good to me:
Just a minor comment for the print version, make sure to write out the links (e.g. in footnotes or in brackets), and reference the Directive with its number and name so the MEPs or their assistants can find it easily.

Best regards,
Bence


On Thu, Mar 13, 2014 at 1:05 PM, Stevie Benton <stevie.benton@wikimedia.org.uk> wrote:
Hello everyone,

As a part of the wider work that we're all doing on advocacy, Wikimedia UK has put together a letter to UK MEPs calling on them to support changes to copyright. The letter covers the three areas of interest of the Free Knowledge Advocacy Group EU:

  • Freedom of panorama
  • Use of orphan works
  • Public domain of publicly-funded works
We've used illustrated examples in the text. We plan to send this out to all 73 UK MEPs within the next couple of days, both by email and by post.

Do let me know if you have any thoughts. 

Thanks and regards,

Stevie

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