Looks OK to me.
I have a Ladin-Italian dictionary that a friend brought me from a trip to Northern Italy (my friends know I'm a freak of dictionaries). I checked a few words, and could find them all. I cannot check the syntax and style though, so to be on the safe side, I emailed the Istitut Ladin Micurà de Rü, which published the dictionary and asked for their opinion. For once, it's easy to find an expert :)
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