Maybe someone can help me understand where I'm going astray here.

I wrote an article about one of my favorite comic book artists of the 1940s, a woman named Lily Renée.  I first posted it to the Women in Comics wikia I run (http://womenincomics.wikia.com/) before deciding it was good and notable enough to put on Wikipedia proper (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lily_Renée)

I went to check on it recently and found it has been flagged with this notice:

"This article is written like a personal reflection or essay rather than an encyclopedic description of the subject. Please help improve it by rewriting it in an encyclopedic style."

Now, I'm the first to admit I probably could have cited it better, though all the information I wrote came from the two interviews I did cite.  But I'm really not seeing how it is "written like a personal reflection or essay", as they define it, i.e. it has no primary research, she is not a "personal invention", it does not state my "feelings" on the topic, nor is it a "discussion forum". (viz: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:What_Wikipedia_is_not#PUBLISHER)

It IS however written in "summary" style, and uses proper formal language (viz: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Encyclopedic_style#Information_style_and_tone)

Do you think whoever flagged it really meant it just needs to be cited better, or is there something I'm not seeing?

Thanks, 
Alexa