[Foundation-l] New draft of privacy policy (urgent)

[Samuel Klein]

I made a few more changes, but left the "current" versino of the page
untouched. Please review:

http://meta.wikimedia.org/w/index.php?title=Draft_Privacy_Policy_June_19_2008&diff=1061042&oldid=1057919

SJ

On Wed, Jun 25, 2008 at 4:21 PM, Mike Godwin <mgodwin at wikimedia.org> wrote:

>
> SJ writes:
>
> > I did some further condensing of language, and replaced the second
> > person
> > everywhere with the third person.  I also tried to clarify a few
> > sections
> > that I found misleading or incomplete...   For instance, when you
> > email me
> > through the wiki, I can see /your/ email address.
>
> After a review of both Nathan's and SJ's revisions, I've decided to
> adopt those revisions.  The current version of the revised draft
> policy can be found at:
>
>        http://meta.wikimedia.org/wiki/Draft_Privacy_Policy_June_19_2008
>
>
>
> --Mike
>
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