Oh another thing. I also believe it'd be easier to read if laid out like
this...
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This is the first paragraph.
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This is the modified first paragraph
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This is the second paragraph
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This is the second paragraph, as modified
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And so on...
--
Gareth Owen
"Wikipedia does rock. By the count on the "brilliant prose" page, there
are 14 not-bad articles so far" -- Larry Sanger (12 Jan 2001)
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