Some thoughts upon running through this (roughly in the order I am experiencing them): - This is actually pretty cool. Cooler than I expected it to be! - Instructions sometimes tell me to click "edit source" and sometimes to click "edit", even though it always means that I should click "edit source". Since the VE button says "edit", this is potentially pretty confusing. - At the end of missions, the button says "Congrats me!". That's pretty jarring English - more natural would be either, "Congrats, me!" or "Congrats to me!" - The "select how you would reply to this person" challenges are...patronizing? That's not quite the right word, but I don't think they're modelling anything useful by basically pointing out "hey, you shouldn't be a rude jackass" as if it's someone's going to read those options and go "yes! this is clearly how I should act!". More useful would be modelling interaction strategies and tricks, like how to engage with some who's left you a rude message or even just what information is useful to provide to other users. - Galactic challenges keep launching new tabs for me when they don't seem like they ought to (i.e. there's no reason I need to have the results of that challenge preserved in one firefox tab while I move on in another) - The "watchlist" module has instructions that are a little bit confusing - it instructs you on *how *to watchlist (blue star, etc), but then tells you to *click *on watchlist on the "top right". Since both the star and the actual watchlist link are on the top right, it's likely going to be unclear to newbies whether you want them to click on the star you just explained, or the link you didn't. - In general when you're telling people to "click X above", it might be useful to use quotes so they know you're telling to click on something that literally says that - tell them to *click "contributions" above *rather than to *click contributions above* - When doing spelling corrections, the hover box listing what I needed to correct obscured part of the text that needed correcting. I couldn't correct that until I closed the box. Once I did that, I was bumped out of the lesson entirely. Couldn't figure out how to the mission to pick back up there, so I had to stop. Why can't we either minimize the instructions box, or have it resurrect when we complete a step (that is, if I did what it wanted me to do, it should pick back up smoothly when I save the page with its next instruction, rather than just disappearing forever because I had to click the X) In short: really very cool, but in the parts I managed to get through (Missions 1-2 and part of 3) there are some small interface issues that need work, and one *glaring *one that short-circuited my attempt to get through a mission and, I guess, the entire adventure. -Fluffernutter On Wed, Oct 16, 2013 at 5:56 PM, Jake Orlowitz &lt;jorlowitz(a)gmail.com&gt; wrote: _______________________________________________ Wikimedia-l mailing list Wikimedia-l(a)lists.wikimedia.org Unsubscribe: https://lists.wikimedia.org/mailman/listinfo/wikimedia-l, <mailto:wikimedia-l-request@lists.wikimedia.org?subject=unsubscribe>