Nathan writes:
* Consistent terminology: Projects are variously referred to as
projects,
wikis, WMprojects, WMProjects, Wikiprojects, etc.
This is an entirely fair criticism, in my view.
* Editing for length: I think there are a number of
paragraphs that
could be
condensed without losing readability or meaning. I've done a bit of
that,
most especially in the first half. Might not be able to save a huge
amount
of text this way, but there are definitely opportunities.
Thanks! I was hoping someone might tackle this.
If you want, this version can be copied into the other
draft version
as a
revision (and then reverted) so that the differences can be easily
seen.
I think this is a fine idea -- just make sure you're the one who does
both the substitution and the reversion, so that it's clear to anyone
who's reviewing the history that you're doing this for diff purposes.
--Mike