Your text is fine, I wouldn't delete it. But the first two paragraphs of your text seem to be from a specific point of view. Is your text from an epistemological point of view? Even though your text was concise, it used too much of a definitive tone.

Fred Bauder <fredbaud@ctelco.net> wrote:

Please edit the article if you are moved to, but don't trash it. I wrote
most of the first portion and certainly will expect you to incorporate the
material in that part in any rewrite you do. A rewrite that simply trashes
the whole preceeding article is just an invitation to trouble. I agree that
it would be very difficult to incorporate Larry's text, but there is a body
of knowledge behind what he wrote which with research could be set forth.

Fred